gone.

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    saddness dwells within mah soul...
    emptyness fills mah heart...
    happyness escapes mah grasp...
    the cold continues to linger in mah presence...
    the only thing i wished for...
    stolen away by the only person who could give it to me...
    a true smile

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    WordSlinger commented on gone.

    05-09-2009

    Very original, I like the dialect/lingo of mah So this is a mah good poem, I gave it a 9

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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