good bye

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    good bye

    like he thunderous pound of the dragon's wings,
    the black widow bites,the scorpion stings,
    or the sly rattlesnake that waits in the grass,
    striking out as you start to pass,
    soon you feel the venom run thru your veins,
    and you go to a place you feel ne pain.

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    Artie commented on good bye

    08-16-2009

    And into the food chain you fall - cool piece of work - 10 from me

    cliftondurant commented on good bye

    08-15-2009

    all these are deadly i want to live as long as i can then i will be ready for that home of no more pain

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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