goodbye

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  • Lost Love

    goodbye

    The time has come for us to say goodbye
    Better things await us no need to cry
    Please be happy because you deserve to be
    I am so sorry you could not find that happiness with me
    My love for you will never leave my heart
    Go now and make a new start
    Take care of yourself we both know how you can be
    Now is the time to set you free
    I will check on you from time to time to see how you are
    Remember you will always be my shooting star
    You have wandered away from us so many times before
    Please don’t make it any harder for me to walk out this door
    You have always made it no matter what came your way
    So my darling goodbye is all that is left to say

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    philjonesin commented on goodbye

    07-23-2010

    Oh I dig this one. Good editing. no mistakes and great message.

    ansari commented on goodbye

    06-22-2010

    Nostalgia and so emotional. I like it. a 10 from me. I like the flow of words and the emotion, they sound so natural. thank you.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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