he said no

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he said no

i look in the mirror
asking myself
what did i do
to derserve a no

he said no
i just want to be friends
nothing more
nothing less

i dont let him see the pain
i dont let him see the hurt

he said no
i just want to be friends
nothing more
nothing less

finally i get the nervs to ask
why just plain old no
he said i dont want to lose you
now that we are god friends

he said no
i just want to be friends
nothing more
nothing less

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nhorlandi commented on he said no

02-04-2010

mirror, mirror who's the fairest... I'm pretty sure he will say you are. Good write but be very careful with your spellings.

Rhymer commented on he said no

12-24-2009

Very creative and imaginative write, the flow was good. 10 from me.

StefanieStammer

12/25/2009

thank you

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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megan is my rainbow 1
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he said no 3
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"we" 1
slipping away 1
more 2
go away 1
why 1
past 1
mad at you 1
she left me 0
Stand Tall 0
pain 0
God Knows 1
Someone once told me 2
DO YOU SEE ME????? 3