megan is my rainbow

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poem i wrote in 7th grade for school about my best friend

megan is my rainbow

she climbs up after the rain and takes my sorrows away
when i find that pot of gold i cant let it go

there are times when the pot is empty
but i want to see the yellow green purple and red glowing off her face
she might not be very interesting but the colors make me stay

then the rain comes down and she fades away
but she always finds a way to rais up and make my day

she has her ups and downs
but she is always my cheerful colorful rainbow
that shines and shines
and makes my day each day

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nhorlandi commented on megan is my rainbow

02-17-2010

very nice and lovely, simple verses is what I like most.

StefanieStammer

02/17/2010

thank you

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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StefanieStammer’s Poems (19)

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i dont care 1
megan is my rainbow 1
life 1
wisper 1
he said no 3
he dropped down 1
"we" 1
slipping away 1
more 2
go away 1
why 1
past 1
mad at you 1
she left me 0
Stand Tall 0
pain 0
God Knows 1
Someone once told me 2
DO YOU SEE ME????? 3