HEART BURN

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    about the pain of living a life where u are wronged in everything you do. Also it's about being wronged so badly that you have post trematic stress disorder. Plus it's about the inner pains of a family that dont think im a talented writer, and in everything they do they try and belittle me in everything I do!!!!!!!!!!!!  The have tried to stop me from writing poetry and songs. They give me no emotional support, and do everything they can to hurt me, and say I will never be a success in my writing.

    HEART BURN

                              Heart Burn


    My heart burns. Like a case of bad heart burn. My heart burns but it's not heart burn. Terrible things have been done to me in life. Things that cause the heart to burn in pain.

    The pain in my life is so strong. It would be enough to kill 65 men. Strip their lives away from them. Like a wound the slashes away ones flesh. I've lost so much. All you do is take, take, take.

    How much can an innocent man take before he can take no more?


    Copyrighted @By Tom Brown
    8-10-09

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    Tempy commented on HEART BURN

    10-28-2009

    i think your a great writer, i'ver only just started to read your stuff, but i'm really liking what i see
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    tommyd44

    10/30/2009

    im so glad that someone enjoys my writing, id love to be an author that has sold books, i love writing, i write to get my feelings out to people

    Angellightwolf1 commented on HEART BURN

    10-24-2009

    Surfing and reading here today and saw you posted. Regarding your commentary well, now,don't you think it is time to let the family go move on, do what you want, because who cares what others think? It is a waste of time as far as I am concerned. I was chillin' out today unexpected no work load. So I am reading, rating, and commenting on what I want to here today and so I give you a 10 just because I can... Best Wishes on your endeavors in all you do... Sometimes we just have to say "screw you silently to others" or verbally lol! Cause' they don't matter...
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    tommyd44

    10/30/2009

    thank you someone gets how i feel, and gets how i have had to become cold

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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