Heartbreak

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  • Confusion

    Heartbreak

     A thousand tears I have cried for you
    I always prayed your love was true
    But what a fool I have been
    You dont care you just pretend
    Never again will I believe
    The lies you tell me
    My heart is broken
    Cant you see
    I really did believe
    In what could be
    You toyed with my emotions
    You gave me false hope
    Never will I love again
    The pain is to deep
    So forever I shall sleep

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    Saylar commented on Heartbreak

    10-16-2009

    I enjoyed this piece, straight and to the point, simplicity at its best but with power behind it! Thank you for sharing! I have posted this to my facebook page for many to read.
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    Cerene

    10/16/2009

    Thank you. I linked to to my facebook page the night I posted it also.

    LordVasago commented on Heartbreak

    10-12-2009

    Ohh i love this one. Can literally feel what you are feeling here.
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    Cerene

    10/16/2009

    you always know what I am feeling my friend. ((hugs 2 u))

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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