helicopters

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helicopters

Remote control helicopters,

Time capsules, and a writing pad.

It all seems to be playful,

Until they bring out the big boys.

Its race after race

Tell you nock them down

Then they give a helluva roar

 

Was goanna nock you down,

Am goanna put a missiles to the grown,

And blow it off them hedges

I think maybe I will give the copter a test

I think latter it seems yawl are racing

To the death,

So I’ll just write

As you all fight

 

Remote control helicopters,

Time capsules, and a writing pad

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christianprep commented on helicopters

06-26-2009

hey sis i like this one ............... ....................... what do i rate it thought...lol

LadyLuck commented on helicopters

06-26-2009

hmm intresting......i wanna play? can anyone join the death race...

toriatea

06/26/2009

sure why not

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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