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    The feelings that I feel are trapped in my inner soul.
    The striving pressure still exists, pulling at my mind.
    The sacred thoughts I keep, scared to let them out.
    The overwhelming sense that gives me so much doubt.
    The anger I keep inside, for the sake of everyone else.
    I put on a mask, to make me more reliable to myself.
    One day I will press through, but for now I have the real me hidden.

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    loveangel4life commented on Hidden

    02-02-2009

    Its crazy how much I relate to this. Keep the poems coming. Even with such a short poem your talent shines through.

    yermobutterfly commented on Hidden

    12-18-2008

    i like your poem.

    Vincent commented on Hidden

    12-14-2008

    Nice poem

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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