Hidden Feelings

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A poem about having a crush on someone :)

Hidden Feelings

My mind – it taunts me as we sit close by,

No words escape my unkissed lips as you

Tease me gently. Can't overcome this high

That overwhelms me. My friends all know it's true,

My unspoken feelings that I'll never share

Are on the surface waiting to break free

From my tormented mind. I wouldn't dare

To risk rejection when we're soon to be...

But butterflies inside - they drive me mad!

As they dance and tumble inside me as we speak,

And make my stomach flutter – makes me sad

That you deserve my words but I'm too weak

To take this action on my new desires -

I fear I'll burn amongst my scorching fires!

 

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toredbloodink commented on Hidden Feelings

11-30-2016

Well you crushed the crush feeling.... Very well written.... As you love and write not all will skip to how you feel or express it.... Make sure you hide nothing from yourself.... Write some more pay yourself a visit.... exquisite and well done

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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