hope unto the

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    hope unto the

    friggid air with natures scorn
     unto the earth a newbabe born,
    clinging to a beating heart
     having to choose a living art,
    for choice in the matter our eye plainly see's
     is but a life of hypocracy,
    asking aloud-will we ever understand
     the sorrow within joy-letting go of demand,
    hope is the only pill fit for consumption
     feeding it unto ourselves a national disfunction,
    our forces lie divded as one
     a fools game the powers have spun,
           trigger of man 
                 should not be trigger in hand,
    unity of neighbors a forgotten plan
     only together could we ever make a stand...... 

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    dherrington commented on hope unto the

    07-12-2009

    very original...very realistic...definitely worth adding to my favorites...i would suggest using spellcheck though...the misspellings tend to be a bit distracting.

    strangefellow

    07/12/2009

    i'm not really good with computers-i dont know how to use spellcheck yet but i'm learning

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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