How could you?

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How could you?

Shattered in the eyes of the devil,
where if you look close enough you see a broken soul,
broken heart,
twisted mind.

Take fear as a consequence for happiness,
hurt as a consequence for love,
and pain as a new emotion impossible to grasp.

Have my acid tears burn your mind,
drive you insane,
as a reward for pain....
but i've endured worse.

You'll never understand what you put me through,
the hurt,
the love,
the want.
 For your own happiness?

Take it all as a reward for ruining this soul,
this heart,
this mind.

But don't come back.

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starfox115 commented on How could you?

02-19-2010

this is how my poems were when i was starting out. i enjoyed it. try to read up on poetry concepts to elevate your skills

cmlestrade commented on How could you?

02-17-2010

Very good. This sounds like the purging of all the hurt you endured.

chessmaxster1 commented on How could you?

02-17-2010

Nice poem! Wow you were bored! LOL! :) Nice! thanks for the comment!

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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