HUSH

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    HUSH



    Consumed by your very essence,
    Your souls fire ignites me.
    I feel my blood rush,
    When your words are in my head like a whisper….hush….
    I feel your energy around me,
    It surrounds my soul completely….
    Embracing...
    Warm touch,
    Gives a cold shiver,
    My fire awakened,
    The predatory animal within.
    Your Soft skin,
    My senses begin to spin.
    I feel the demon alive within,
    I feel it is time for sin.
    Your scent fills my mind,
    My blood boils I am blind,
    With fire…
    desire.
    Hush…
    Your words whisper within,
    Calming the beast from sin.
    It is our time to build our fire,
    Not to rush,
    to begin.
    Hush….
    Soon I will be within you,
    Hush….
    You words whisper within,
    For now let our hearts burn,
    Spin.
    Hush……..

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    nbosko commented on HUSH

    06-06-2010

    WOW!! I loved it. You can totally feel the passion and fire!!

    Teardrops commented on HUSH

    06-05-2010

    Well done the pictures you create in these words are wonderful Thanks for the read Marie

    ladyjude commented on HUSH

    06-05-2010

    The flame of passion ignites. Where would romance ever be without passion. Passion burns within every romance.

    Nadia1986 commented on HUSH

    06-05-2010

    Wow sexy hot write give in to lust and to the heat of sin and everything that your body is craving nice great job 10!

    jtlove commented on HUSH

    06-05-2010

    Oh. That would Brother not Brither. lol. Thanks.

    HeratikPoet

    06/05/2010

    I figured lol, I write enough I am not to picky in chat and such, thanks for the comment it is interesting to see how others feel when they read my work and the different perspective of how the poetry is viewed always intrigues me.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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