I am my weapon.

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    need I say more?

    I am my weapon.

     I am the dog, I am his bite
    I am the sun, I am its light
    I am the man, I am his spear
    I am the truth I am its fear.

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    ATCS commented on I am my weapon.

    04-10-2012

    i have saying that goes back with me a few years. everything we do is because of the fear of consequence. to explain, a stop sign doesn't just jump in the middle of the street and slam the driver down on the pavement. it doesn't physically force the car to a stop. it's maybe getting a ticket or getting hurt (or maybe hurting someone else, although i doubt few give a ... about that) which causes us to stop. it took u few words to embody the essence of the difference between what is real, and why we are afraid of it. the hard parts kissing the snake without fear, but death always seems to be lurking a breath away
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