I ask you now

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I ask you now

You came to me again
with a question in your heart
telling me what's wrong
in your life at that point in time

You shared with me
a secret deep
and opened yourself
to love's disappointment and pain

Your question still
after all I say and do
'will I let you go
again as I did last
when we were thru'

I ask you now
as I last did not
to be mine forever
and thicken the plot

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Saylar commented on I ask you now

11-10-2009

The last verse of this piece gave me the chills! A rekindled love, a second chance that many never get, powerful stuff indeed Marius! Best wishes on the contest! You have my vote on this one. Saylar

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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