I Call This Paradise

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    I Call This Paradise

    Come walk with me threw the forest for it is magical.
    With streams of blue and shaddows of purple.

    Look closely and you shall see
    The faries of wishes dancing amungst the breeze.

    There are dwarves and elve whom play together
    with hearts pure and young forever.

    Pegusus rest in the green meddows about.
    While their young prance with grace about.

    A wizard stands up on a cliff so high
    watching over far and wide
    with his back propped straight and full of pride.

    While dragons of peace fly over thier home
    in waits for any preditor whom may dare to roam.

    The clouds puffed light and soft
    over a sky of silky satin blue

    I call this Paradise
    Wouldn't you?

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    KagenoKitsune commented on I Call This Paradise

    09-21-2009

    i like this story! is very nice, few misspelled words but is good story

    gallaxy commented on I Call This Paradise

    09-12-2009

    I diffinitely would call this Paradise! I luv reading Enchantment stories. I've got many books in this catagory. And try to keep up with new ones. You did an excellant job with this one. I hope you keep it up. Lookin forward to YOUR future writings. Will drop in on this page occaisionally to see anything new aspiring.

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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