I can feel you...

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I can feel you...

You're far away,
but, I can feel you.
You exist in my every breath,
in every beat of my heart,
adding a spectacular sizzle
in all the right places.
Even when I close my eyes,
I see your face and feel
the fire of your caress.
Your presence is a tangible thing...
yet as hard to grasp as the air.
I reach for you,
but you elude me.
Still, I can feel you;
the softness of a petal,
a warm wind on my cheek,
a ray in my vision,
a distant light that
ever draws me near.

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Maleficent commented on I can feel you...

10-05-2009

So descriptive and beautiful. The imagery is powerful. Evokes feelings of hopeless desire... Something I'm familiar with! Great write!

shewheat46 commented on I can feel you...

05-15-2009

VERY PRETTY

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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