I can see you

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  • Death

    I can see you

     I can see you, and I can feel you, but you are not there.

    I lost you, but I held on to you until I knew the pain, I had to bare.

    You were the light that made me feel whole, the first one who was a part of my soul.

    I will feel you and love you until the day that I die, but God knows, I need to say good-bye.

    I'll hold you in my dreams and will never really let you go, but can't let losing you make me feel so low.

    I can see you, and I can feel you, but you are not there.

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    nu2ya2000 commented on I can see you

    07-04-2009

    you have an amazing capability of capturing vast feelings many feel after the deaths of loved ones. I can relate so thanks. you practically took my feelings and gave them amazing inspirational words that i can 't seem to express ever.Basically: AWESOME JOB!!! :)
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    bjmom65

    07/07/2009

    Thank you. You are my only comment, but you inspire me!

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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