I Love You

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    this is for myy ex.....which was my boyfriend at the time i wrote this. Shawn Pfefferkorn.

    I Love You
    At night i will rest but, will not sleep.
    And at daybreak i will search for nothing, but you....
    You're in my mind often,
    But you're in my heart forever!!!!

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    gallaxy commented on I Love You

    03-11-2010

    Dont know if u were 16, 15, or 14 when this was written, but whatever the reason for breakup usually not good, You'll always remember the person, good and the bad things. Good simple write
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    LucyKelton

    08/18/2010

    thank-you so much for your feedback. :) it means a lot.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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