I LOVE YOU

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    I LOVE YOU

    ...I hate the day that we met, the thought of you in my head I cant shake loose... I hate the smell of your hair, the way you switched yo dairy air, when you was walking in them heeled boots... I hate how yo eyes blinked, and how you think, the world revolves just for you... I hate i looked you in yo eyes, consoled all yo cries, cause I still don't know if yo i love you's was true... I hate how yo smile seems heaven sent, a trick of strength, is you trying to leave me with pockets bent, I hate i forgave you for yo wrongs, grabbed hold of yo hand threw these storms, I hate it was yo shoulder i cried on, i hate that i cant move on, cause it was me who done wrong, now you gone, and my I LOVE YOU'S wont bring you home...

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    mistyparish commented on I LOVE YOU

    05-06-2009

    That's some true emotions right there. Good work!

    1LostGypsy commented on I LOVE YOU

    02-15-2009

    Very strong words. The best writers are those who have had it rough. I like this one.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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