I need a teacher

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  • Lost Love

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     I'm not a poet it just a shalow tought from a shalow mind

    I need a teacher

    We were flying together in d air
    facing d rain and storm
    with d strenght of love together we
    place them as d stool of our feets

    When i felt that d moon were near
    u took your wind from me and sail
    with it

    Teach me how to fly without wind
    how to out run this gravity that is pulling me

    severely i've fallen to d Earth now pain and
    sadness is tearing me apart

    I,ve taking to d occean to emty my mind d roar of d 
    wind to tell d detain of my proplems 

    I willed my heart to u but u riped it apart
    I gave my world to u  but u trew into d dept
    I shared my dreams with u But u snached it from me

    U turned off d light that light my way and make darkness
    to envelope my world

    It ,s hard to beleive u could tore me out of my very
    soul and showed it to me

    U bleeded out every bit of my hope

    If i've listen to d wise saying of d bird we called it
    song
    Iwould have known from  d start that u were hiding
    under a mask

    who can teach me how to nurse this deep feelings in
    my stomach



     

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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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