I stand a lone

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    • noreaga2882
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    I stand a lone

     My world is crashing down upon me
    With every moment more crucial than the other
    I stand alone in a dark lonely world 
    Pretending that all is alright as I watch my life deminish right before me
    How can I protect myself when I express myself I expose myself
    My screams of solidarity and pleas of desperation fall upon deaf ears, adverse to reformation
    I stand alone with blood stained blades dangling from my arms 
    With spent cases still smoking surrounding my feet trying to weather the storms
    I stand alone 
    Unconscious I lay plagued with death and a weary heart 
    I hope and pray that one person heard my deeply seated pleas and screams for mercy upon me
    Doctor's and nurses beat and pound on my chest trying to restore a broken and displaced heart
    Looking down on my lifeless body I can only think 
    What if!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    The Mysterious One

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    Worthless commented on I stand a lone

    01-21-2011

    In my way of thinking and the way you think, may or may not be the same? I think negative and it seems your in the army so I'll leave it at that for now. Maybe you can explain and send me a message and read some of mine? I like it
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    WordSlinger commented on I stand a lone

    01-02-2010

    this is cool, as you were looking down, Angels were behind you, I like this write, ty WS
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    DarkChi commented on I stand a lone

    09-17-2009

    Awesome! i really like this...it's dark and deathly it's totally my style! you have so much creativity!
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    derfiniw23 commented on I stand a lone

    09-17-2009

    Really, really great stuff here! Like, it's so deep, and all the silly things in life seem selfish, and ridiculous. Make sure you fix your title though...it's capitals for a title. I Stand Alone ............not a lone. No biggie.
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    Lolee commented on I stand a lone

    09-17-2009

    This is truly profound. You speak of a world most of us know nothing about. Freedom obtained by the shedding of blood...how giving...how Christ-like. He shed His blood so that we may live, You shed yours so that we may be free...We owe you a debt we cannot pay.... We can only give our heart-felt thanks, which is totally lame. But, Thank you. My heart goes out to you.
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

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