My Mind

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    • noreaga2882
    • I've been gone for awhile with writers block but I'm back now hopefully with even better work than before!!!!!!!!

    My Mind
    my mind

    my mind grows deep as my heart grows shallow
    my heart grows shallow because there is no one to take care of it
    i write to grab a hold of those deep thoughts and let them be heard
    wait, i know i can't do both take care of my heart and write
    then i might lose my mind and go crazy
    or maybe its to late i'm already crazy
    its not to late save my heart or is it
    as each day passes my heart grows colder and colder
    now i'm getting bolder and bolder
    so don't blame me when you look into my eyes and see a killer instead of a lover
    blame society or better yet blame the marine corps
    from keeping my heart away from the love it needs and strive for to stay strong
    from the one person who could always ease my mind

    the mysterious one

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    Worthless commented on My Mind

    01-21-2011

    That is true, I feel exactly what your saying.. The government only cares about money and the army, marines, navy, airforce whatever ain't the way it used to be.. And they don't stand for the same values or honors, respects or nothing like they did before we were born.. That is the truth.. I mean why are our soldiers out fighting and dying just to make the government happy and put money in their pockets? I could go on but I won't. I don't wanna scare you off. But think about it, it is true. Same with welfare, it ain't there to help people only the ones who are lazy and incompitent and most are on drugs and buy alcohol and cigarettes with their danm welfare.. What kind of crap is That?! What about the people who actually need it? Anyways..
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    Lolee commented on My Mind

    09-17-2009

    War changes a man. Hold on soldier, just hang on...okay? We are praying for you...............take care..............and You pray for you too.............Good clear message in this poem.
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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