I Want To Have Sex, Like They Do In The Movies™

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    I Want To Have Sex, Like They Do In The Movies™

     Your hand to my hand
    Your touch sliding to mine
    I want to know how this love can escalate
    I want to feel the rush that we only get when two bodies meet, but are one

    I have to feel your breathe
    Blowing on my neck
    Your grip holding onto me
    Your body warmth yet so cold pressing against mine

    Love is valued but isn’t expressed
    I want to know the feeling of when two lovers love

    This word that that’s thrown around called sex is simply just immature nature
    But I wouldn’t want that
    I want to be loved
    I want you to show me what this love is
    I want to make our love grow past four simple letters

    As we watch the seasons come to a set
    And watch the spring blossom our flowers, so beautiful yet so defying

    I would like you to be my teacher of this so called love
    But furthermore
    For you to take what has already been taking, the one that has taken it hasn’t deserve it the way you do
    We know that sex is nothing more than an action
    To fuck is nothing more than a noun a verb, an explanation or the thing I say
    But I want to make an adjective; I want you to show me how to love

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    BringMeBullets commented on I Want To Have Sex, Like They Do In The Movies™

    03-08-2010

    This is exciting, to be honest with you. I was glad that it wasn't some mack-out session. You defined your objective, and it's something that would be hard to do. You have power in these words though. That's something I haven't seen in a long time. It's amazing, the things actions can do. They are much more powerful than words.. Or so I thought, until I read this. Thank you for sharing. Great write. A ten from me.
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    CasimirJash commented on I Want To Have Sex, Like They Do In The Movies™

    09-21-2009

    don't we all lol, they make it look so good but in reality...If everyone is involved in immature nature then love will never be discovered, and if it is, it might be a little to late, most think they could never find it but if they open their hearts and eyes they'll see. I like that line "For you to take what has already been taking, the one that has taken it hasn't deserve it the way you do", is so true, you give your love to someone else that doesn't deserves it because of the sexual urges you have and then it's that feeling shame you feel afterwards(for some people), but we are all human and are very active, this world hasn't learn yet, how to love.
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    OmgitsAntonio

    09/21/2009

    you found exactly what i was comming from in this piece. i was trying to show how love, or losing something so precious that people say it, (virginity) would be lost in just the act of having that sexual urge. and i wanted to be shown how to really love, or how to go eyond the words of sex, and to know what love in that nature is.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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