i was wrong

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    i was wrong

    i thought you loved me
    but i guess i was wrong
    you gave birth to me
    but i guess that was a mistake
    ive tried to b a good daughter
    but i guess i didnt try hard enough
    i tried to show you love
    but i guess it wasnt enough
    i gave you a second chance to be in my life
    but it just wasnt enough for you
    i dont know what else you want from me
    i can only be myself
    why did you give birth to me
    it seemd like it wasnt supposed to be
    i thought you loved me
    but i guess i was wrong

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    boomboom56 commented on i was wrong

    11-23-2009

    Heart breaking piece. Your words are simple, yet pure. The anger is kept out so the truth will come through. What a burden for a young woman to carry around. Peace.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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