I Wish I Was A Star

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    I Wish I Was A Star
    I wish I was a star just hanging,

    Chilling long side the

    Moon..

    I wish I may I wish I might just

    Chilling with the heavenly stars

    Neighbors

    I wish I may I wish I might make you

    My perfect friends

    Just hanging, chilling shooting the

    Breeze..

    I wish I may I wish I might gaze down

    From the blacken

    Skies…

    Scattering gold dust around your feet

    I wish I may I wish I might make

    Friends with the

    Moon ...


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    countrypoet commented on I Wish I Was A Star

    03-15-2009

    Nice metaphors;very clever storyline.I really like this poem.
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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