If Only for Eternity

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    Poem Commentary

    This poem is about someone i met that was a dream come true. I would like to be with that special person for eternity, but i know i'll will have to leave this world someday and my love won't be able to come with me. So i wrote this if only for eternity wishing that we could remain together fot eternity.

    If Only for Eternity

    If Only for Eternity

    you and i
    if only foe eternity
    you could hold me in your arms
    as it their is no tomorrow
    as we gaze upon the star
    at night
    as they glisten so far away
    but so bright
    if only for eternity
    my love for you is like the mediterranean sea
    it is endless you see
    when our lips meet we will soon see what if only eternity has to offer
    you and me
    threw all of our ups and downs
    good times as well as bad
    promise me if only for eternity
    i want to be your guiding hand
    for all that you may seem to go threw
    i will be your shining star
    and you can be my midnight air
    the two of us together
    our love does not compare!
    if only for eternity
    and with youin my heart
    i know that your not far
    if only for eternity

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    hdmac commented on If Only for Eternity

    08-22-2009

    Watch your spelling, and use more capitals because the common letters distract from your work.
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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