Ignored!

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  • Anger

    Ignored!
    Full of himself… ignored again
    I’ve been hiding beneath this pain
    Trying to give him a chance - -
    Trying to extend my patience….

    But my heart is turning into rust
    Keep waiting and giving a chance.
    The more I give in - - the more I’m taken advantage of.

    All I ask for is a minute of his time
    Out of the several hours of a day…
    Out of the many hours of the weekend…
    Just a minute or two a day would suffice - -
    then I would keep my silence.

    I have always been there when he needs me
    But where was he when I needed him?
    It’s hard to give my all and fall in love
    I’m being treated unfairly - - suffering silently.

    ~~phoenix 04.24.09 12.30pm

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    Taristine commented on Ignored!

    05-31-2009

    How often I had felt this same way. Sadly he didnt see this until I finally got tired enough to stop being silent and left. I really enjoyed reading this.
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    Bobcatmoon commented on Ignored!

    05-23-2009

    so many of sincere and genuine creativity create from real experiences...good piece yet no person deserves to be ignored
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    phoenixhope

    05/28/2009

    Yes...a struggle that I can't seem to shake off...silence is my best friend

    phoenixhope

    05/28/2009

    Yes...a struggle that I can't seem to shake off...silence is my best friend

    DrEaMeR94 commented on Ignored!

    05-22-2009

    who was this poem meant for ? what were you feeling when you wrote this poem? was this from a personal experience?
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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