IloveUGoodbYe

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    IloveUGoodbYe


    I remember when I say yes
    It was one of the greatest gift
    For long years, my life revolve around you
    I never wait for the time you and I fall apart

    I was damn stupid
    For making your life complicated
    I thought everything is alright
    But here I am, waiting for miracles to happen

    How I wish you will be here again
    Here at my side, holding my hands
    Lying in your shoulder and closing my eyes
    But it’s all my fantasy…I know it’s just a reverie

    My eyes now see reality
    Reality that one day you’ll be happy
    Contented of God’s blessings
    And hoping that someday, you will forgive me

    Before I leave, I just want to say
    That my love for you never fades
    Whatever you do, wherever he are
    All I’ve done is for your own happiness

    If one day, you glimpse a shadow of me
    Never look straight, nor gaze
    I never want you to witness my downfall
    Because my devotion to love you never died away



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    mpjtforever commented on IloveUGoodbYe

    08-13-2009

    very nicely written. I too have been caught up in losing that someone that I loved. keep the faith and keep on writing you have potential to become a great writer, your new friend jodi. read some of my poems. I think you will find we have some in common.

    wubuj

    05/11/2010

    hi jodi :)

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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