I'm the shoulder you can

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    I'm the shoulder you can

     I'm the shoulder you can cry on.
    I'm the shoulder you can relay on
    evey day and night.
    I'm the shoulder you can love on
    as long as you will let me stay.
    Just remember one thing I love you with all my heart
    Your the first person I can say that to. Just to let you know.
    I wouldn't have it any other way. Just to love on you as long
    as you will let me.

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    Lolee commented on I'm the shoulder you can

    08-23-2009

    You sound like a really nice person. This was well done. Ten from me.
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    cutbanksam commented on I'm the shoulder you can

    07-22-2009

    Not too shabby. I hope the person you wrote this for appreciates you. Sam
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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