Immortal Love

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    Love is the only thing that makes life worth living, it is when it's not there that it hurts, the words "To be with you is life Without is worse than death" speak true, my life right now is not life

    Immortal Love

     

     

    I cannot imagine my life without you

    I tried living it once

    But it seems as though the gods themselves have planned our union

    So I’ll stand with you forever

    I’ll protect you, as I’m able

    I won’t abandon you, nor could I if I wanted

    Our love shall be as the great seas

    Infinite, ever flowing, beautiful

    To be with you is life

    Without is worse than death

    I need you my love, more than water

    More than air

    My love for you is eternal

    My thirst for you unquenchable

    You are everything to me

    So lets find our way back to each other

    So that I may again breath

    So that again I may live

    For our love is immortal

    And forever with you shall I stay my dearest

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    blvdobd2009 commented on Immortal Love

    11-08-2009

    I feel that you are an an incredible artist... from one poet to another your word are truly a gift from god...thank you

    wickedfrost commented on Immortal Love

    06-30-2009

    That is such a beautiful poem...great job!!! I know how that feels, granted Im much older then you....but that was beautifully written!!!

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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