In My Madness

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    In My Madness

    If those eyes would stare at me as I wake up and fall asleep,
    Conquer my vulnerable soul and in my wicked dreams creep.
    Grab me tight, caress me with might, overflow me with his kiss,
    Devour this unpleasant misery, come near! fill me with bliss.

    And whether I cry or I laugh, he would hold me to his chest
    My mind on an ongoing quest, my heart answers at its best.
    Should I stay forever in his arms, take me away from harm
    Adore me with intense, I am smitten by his charm pretense.

    His ardent character indulge me to him most,
    The man in my dreams that I unassumingly boast.
    I'll never ask anything, he is the man for me, indeed.
    My en strange heart and eccentric mind absolutely agreed.

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    tenderpoison commented on In My Madness

    06-10-2009

    very well written, your phrasing is original and it has really great flow. I know exactly how that dream feels...

    r3i

    06/11/2009

    thank you very much! i read a lot of your poems.. your imagery is totally amazing!

    RedRubyRaz09 commented on In My Madness

    06-07-2009

    hey you make me feel all warm and stuff!!! This is kewl as ice. You are so talented. Keep up the good work.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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