Incomplete

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Incomplete

A thousand people

all around

tear me down.

A thousand words

I could say

but that doesn't make things okay.

If all thats left

in me

makes me cry

and my body weak

could I ever find

the strength again?

I feel the distance

when we're so close

I felt alive

and yet a ghost

and in me

crippled

my soul inside

the love comes out in every

tear I cry

but some tears stay

and do not leave

and I'm loving you

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NBParis commented on Incomplete

08-05-2011

I like how you write, straight from your heart and on to the page. Very good work. THank you for sharing this, I'm sorry you had to.

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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