Inner Thoughts

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    Inner Thoughts

    Never judge the distance
    By the hours that you keep
    Never take advantage of time
    Or the darkness of the deep

    A shallow mind of waisted thoughts
    Keeper of the soul
    Deep within a a shadowed box
    Where the sercrets lie untold

    Misty clouds of scarlet red
    A thought of question dose unfold
    judge not the story
    Untill you've seen its end

    Life can be but one day long
    Yet never have an end
    A splended thought
    No place to go
    A place to be
    A stone to mark my way
    Just a thought to never mind
    So long my friend your free............

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    beautifuldeath commented on Inner Thoughts

    12-18-2008

    loved this. if only everyone would "judge not the story until you've seen its end".

    litldeer commented on Inner Thoughts

    12-16-2008

    I like how you ended this poem, So long my friend your free... Very nice

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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