Is he our new beginning?

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    Is he our new beginning?


     

    With your seed in me will you smile at me?

    If I bear it to life will you despise me?

    When you hold him will I see hatred in your eyes?

    Will he bring us a new life?

     

    I have tried to savage our love

    But none seem to please you

    Will he awaken our old memories to life?

    Or will he make it dead than ever

     

    Will you ever love me again?

    Will you ever smile at me again?

    Will I wake up anymore to hear that cheerful voice?

    Or will I wake up to shed remained tears of yesterday

    Is he our new beginning?

     

    I puzzle a lot

    How did those lovely moments die?

    Why did they die?

    All I see is scars of our yesterday so evergreen in my memory

    Will you love me if you child calls me mum

    Is he our new beginning?

     

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    photochick commented on Is he our new beginning?

    08-24-2009

    wow this is very touching powerful emotions are here such longing to be with another yet stuck being alone so much passion pain and yearning in this great flow so vivid your talent really shines here wonderful from start to finish
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    biteme commented on Is he our new beginning?

    08-24-2009

    this is very moving i just love how the lines flow. i really like the message tho it may not be a happy 1 it is still strong!! keep up the great work!!
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    stnirptoof commented on Is he our new beginning?

    08-24-2009

    it's beautiful, a lot of women go through this with guys. I really love it.
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    sk8ergirl commented on Is he our new beginning?

    08-24-2009

    wow that was a great poem i don't read a poem for the words i read it for how it makes me feel and helps me learn. thanks i learned a lot
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    ty4 commented on Is he our new beginning?

    08-24-2009

    As far as i have understood this poem, it is all about a woman who needs to know if the unborn will bring a bound between her and the father of the unborn.
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    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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