My priceless, yet irreplaceable jewel

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My priceless, yet irreplaceable jewel


 

I can’t imagine that you are gone

Of all the things that we went through

Even the words that you whispered

 You’ve made them untrue

As I stare into space I see a vacuum in my heart with no one to feel it

I now know the worth of what cannot be replaced

Even diamonds are worthless

You were my priceless jewel yet irreplaceable

Please put your mind to the past memories and all we shared together

No matter what would strive I was always by your side

Be assured really want you back

I know I hurt you bad

I’m sorry please come back

 

               

 

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Twinopolis commented on My priceless, yet irreplaceable jewel

08-24-2009

-claps- Wonderful!!! I simply cannot await to read more!

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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