It's me

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  • Devotion

    Poem Commentary

    If you'all would focus on me and let me know how great I am and involve yourself in everything that i do and think and Let me tell you what's on my mind, then you would have to think about how disappointed you are that you aren't me.   Cause I'm me!  and I'm really great!  Cause I'm me!  C'mon focus on me for a while.

    It's me

     Hey it's me and i'm really great
    I write about me so don't you all hate
    I'm really cool now I'm going off to school hun
    so let me show you what its all about the fun
    I do a lotta neat things, I'm number one so far
    I gotta bunch of neat friends, I drive a neat car!
    I'm gonna be number one someday
    cause I'm a number one me moving force
    Gimme a neat call on my really neat phone
    As long as you think about me, you won't be alone
    Let me be your teller, let me be your right
    I'm saucy and clever so don't say goodnight
    I'll be yer guru and I'll be yer shrink
    focus on me and you won't haveto think
    Well you can think, that's okay
    but think about me every day
    So me me me me me me me
    and a me me me me me me me

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    Tempy commented on It's me

    08-09-2009

    so this is about how if people are paying attention to you your more inspired and encouraged to write more and improve cos you start to look forward to the next thing you write?? I can see why people can make or break us and our motivation can be halted with critism so every nice thing said helps you become better and want to be better and even learn to not listen to people who like to put people down. its not narsisitic at all you never came across as angry or even selfish just absorbed and reason seems good if thats how we grow :) take care and ignore stupid people rise above it and write anyway cos ppl will try to stop people just ignore them laugh at them even agree with them but dont continue the argument just keep posting and know you can :)
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    masterpoet

    08/10/2009

    tanx itsa good poem

    JadedJezzabel commented on It's me

    08-01-2009

    W.o.W..............................................................
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    masterpoet

    08/01/2009

    thank you for liking a very good poem!

    Oblaidon commented on It's me

    07-31-2009

    hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha You got it rigth Lightcourier
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    lightcourier commented on It's me

    07-15-2009

    This is a very interesting piece of narcissistic crap!
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    masterpoet

    08/01/2009

    what narcistic?

    smith

    09/23/2009

    Heyyy...don't hate... cause its not all about you...smile

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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