JESS

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    JESS
    ALMOST WITH A SLIGHT OF HAND...,
    ALMOST IN KIND COMMAND,
    THE TIMELESS AMBIGUITY,
    "HER VEIL",
    CAUSES OUR BREATH TO EXHALE,
    "A HANDLESS CLOCK OF BEAUTY",
    THAT TIME'S BETRAYAL,
    AND SMOLDERING IN,"ELECTRICITY",
    ENTANGLED NEUROTIC SELF-HATRED,
    ONE OF MANY MASKS WORN BY HER HUMOR INBREAD,
    AS SHE MATES,WITHE CALM,
    ALL DANGLE IN EROTIC DISSARM,
    AS SHE MATES!,WITH THE CALM!,
    ENTANGLED IN SELF-HATRED,
    FLOWING....,LIKE A DYING,DIMINISHED NOTE...,
    CROWING LIKE A LIVING DURGE,OF "IRISH",
    IN HER ,WITHERING WINTERED,
    FROST BITTEN FRUITS ,ONCE HER LABORS OF LOVE,
    ENTANGLED,NEUROTIC SELF-HATRED,
    ALMOST WITH A SLIGHT OF HAND AND TIMELESS AMBIGUITY,
    HER VEIL!
    ENTANTANGLED NEUROTIC,SELF...... HATRED!,
    HATRED.

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    phoenix29 commented on JESS

    10-10-2019

    you have a very unique style. its whats hidden in and between the lines. a great write, kudos
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    Tempy commented on JESS

    08-18-2009

    ENTANGLED NEUROTIC SELF-HATRED, ONE OF MANY MASKS WORN BY HER HUMOR INBREAD, AS SHE MATES,WITHE CALM, ALL DANGLE IN EROTIC DISSARM, AS SHE MATES!,WITH THE CALM!, ENTANGLED IN SELF-HATRED, wow
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    Lazarus

    08/20/2009

    I'm so,..well,'moved",by your,"generosity". I know who I am",:As do you,"yourself",seem mm,well,Quick,"and savy."i often evoke,or answer,a question, in the same,"self depricating tone","i, say,I'm ridiculous", "whats your excuse"? WE are the internal "compass,that encompasses"; well..."all that we do".eh..its just well,..anything "that we wish for", "this life". And this poem,"written 13 yrs.,"ago",from my memory,"only": And i believe she has turned out alright,"just such as you seem,"humbly put".Sorry for long winded message;" and thanks" "johny"

    Tempy

    08/20/2009

    I have no excuse but laziness... I wanted to rate so i selected an interesting part and pasted. you got me i'm lazy its true but 50 chars is annoying to do

    ginga commented on JESS

    05-07-2009

    This is quite dynamic. Luv the symbolic "veil", very alluring. I also feel these words do justice and make the verses come alive..."smoldering," "entangled," "withering wintered","dimiished note", "crowing durge." THIS POEM ROCKS!
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    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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