Pizzzzzzzzaaaaaaaaazzzz
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  • Philosophy
    • Lazarus
    • "Destiny Is The Longest Mile".

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    Condensed version of Raga Rock/Industrial song I co-wrote. And for any politic of correct weirdos out there;"Race" is referring to "The Rat Race". "Keeping up with the Joneses",some old idioms.

    Pizzzzzzzzaaaaaaaaazzzzzzzzz Overload.

    THE RACE TO THE PLACE ,TO THE FACE,
             THAT NEVER EXSISTED,
             OBSOLESCET PAGEANT,
            FANTASY,PERMITTED PERMITTED,
    ROLL WITH THE PLENTITUDES,
    SICK,OF THE  ALTITUDE, FANTASY PERMITTED,
    SICK FROM THE ALTITUDE,
    COPPING A BAD ATTITUDE,
    What's all the uproar?Hoping you won't have to ignore.
                    SHORT FUSES,BLOWING IN WINDS,UNREMITTING,
         THE RACE TO THE PLACE TO THE FACE,"IRREPLACEABLE".

                            THAT NEVER EXISTED.

    THE ARROGANT,OBSOLESCENT PAGEANT.REALITY/DUALITY.

                                   FANTASY PERMITTED.PERMITTED.

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    ginga commented on Pizzzzzzzzaaaaaaaaazzzzzzzzz Overload.

    05-21-2009

    Great punchy and emphatic lines. The rhythm and past tenses give this an exceptionally powerful message. ginga
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    windsongs

    04/25/2013

    I hear ya, I m with ya, i gottcha:)

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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