life as is

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    life as is
    Life is good, life is bad, it seems as if i'm sad
    Man i need but don't let him be a sleeds
    i cry at night because theres no love in sight
    let my life get right because i don't want to get
    high as a kite.

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    ccslim commented on life as is

    08-24-2009

    Lol short sweet and FULL of innuendos! Happy, sad,regret, and hope! Love is the greatest of these and to which we all desire to grasp! Good write by content and rhymes fine!
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