Life Boat

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    I wrote this for my english class

    Life Boat

     Once I sat down
    In the depths of this valley
    As the floods of
    Emotion filled it's gap

    I drowned in these floods
    Deep into comatose I fell
    To awaken and find myself
    On a life boat with you

    This dingy little raft
    And the things
    You brought on it were the things
    That saved me from drowning

    I was a sinking Titanic
    Crashed on an ice-burg I created
    And you were my life boat
    Always floating

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