Smoke
Smoke, smokeFloating up higher
Watch it swiftly float away
Swirling, twirling
Slowly dissipating
Lost in the sky's
Fire, fire
Watch it burn
Red, and blue, or even green
Hotter, hotter
Watch things die
Watch it burn them
Make them cry
Smoke
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Tags: Inspirational
Floating up higher
Watch it swiftly float away
Swirling, twirling
Slowly dissipating
Lost in the sky's
Fire, fire
Watch it burn
Red, and blue, or even green
Hotter, hotter
Watch things die
Watch it burn them
Make them cry
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ClearlySays commented on Smoke
01-23-2011
- I liked how you started off with smoke and ended with fire instead. That's how life can be, some things seem graceful and end up being surprisingly destructive. This made me think of how I like to watch smoke swirl through sunlight that comes through window blinds in a dark room. I've always wanted to paint something like that. Great work! I'm giving you a 7!
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05/08/2011
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