Life

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    Life
    By Christopher Sandler

    Life is what you make it
    Whether you look at the silver lining
    Or you look at the darkest points
    Life is what you see

    Life is what you make it
    Whether you move on easily
    Or you dwell forever on it
    Life is how you walk the path

    Life is what you make it
    Life is joy, life is grief
    Life is love, life is hate
    Life is feelings shown and hidden

    Life is how you make it
    Life is what you see
    Life is how you walk the path
    Life is you feelings
    Life is how you live it



    Copyright 2009

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    SuperChick76 commented on Life

    01-12-2010

    Indeed so, very nicely written. One typo, though "Life is you feelings" I believe you mean "you'r feelings." Good job, loved it. :)
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    WinterFrost commented on Life

    07-15-2009

    Life is like a box of chocolates... by the time the box gets passed around to you... you're favorites are gone. Standardized stanzas. Short pithy lines. Nice.
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    D3VONNA commented on Life

    04-02-2009

    i like this one. a lot
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    bevneal commented on Life

    03-30-2009

    i like you work please read my poem and tell me you thoughts bevneal
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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