life's a rollercoaster

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    life's a rollercoaster

       Life is full of ups and downs,
    and you tend to feel like gods not around.

    But if you drop all your pride,
    and start to look deep down inside.
     
    Only then will you realize,
    that life is not that dramatized.

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    bluewolf commented on life's a rollercoaster

    08-17-2009

    Very true. Often we tend to make "a mountain out of a mole hill". A bit more faith within our own abilities to surpass minor dificulties will allow for us to challenge and meet those more difficult ones. Well said.

    SEVEN commented on life's a rollercoaster

    08-16-2009

    I totally agree...Life can be a "b" sometimes but you have to take the good with the bad or we will never learn about life if everything is good.....God didn't make this world to be perfect... Only Heaven is perfect....good write....Kudos

    cliftondurant commented on life's a rollercoaster

    08-16-2009

    yes life has it's up and down we must journey on and beleive and keep our pride and things will work out

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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