Live To Forget, Die To Forgive

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    The whole reason for this poem is to show my opinion on death. You may also see another meaning which is near the end after all the things I've been through in my life it seems as if I'm incomplete and my poetry and songwriting is what completes me. So thank you guys for all your support.

    Live To Forget, Die To Forgive

     As a strong young man
    Wrapped in God's plan
    I must carry on
    But please oh please stay strong

    Mother, don't you dare cry
    For everything that lives has a time where it dies
    And brother, don't you lie
    Even your heart can not deny

    That you want me there
    But please do believe I trully care
    I'm being levitated by these broken wings
    Which are broken from the tears and empty dreams

    For it was not by will for me to rest
    For god hath stole the soul from my chest
    And as they pile the dirt
    I ask you to celebrate and never hurt

    Goodbye to everything I used to know
    I love you all even though it doesn't show
    For it's time to sail the sea of death
    It seems these words are all I have left

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    ahardwalk commented on Live To Forget, Die To Forgive

    01-15-2011

    I love your writings and this title itself just sets the mood!! 10 10 10!!
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    kdarcy commented on Live To Forget, Die To Forgive

    11-19-2010

    An interesting write with some great images of feelings lived or not. I enjoyed it twice, thanks for sharing, stop by and check out my offerings if you have a moment, thanks, be well k
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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