Warped And Twisted

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Warped And Twisted

Harsh words & violent blows

Hidden secrets nobody knows

Eyes are open, hands are fisted

Deep inside I'm warped and twisted

So many tricks and so many lies

Too many whens and too many whys

Nobody's special, nobody's gifted

I'm just me, warped and twisted

Sleeping awake & choking on a dream

Listening loudly to a silent scream

Call my mind, the number's unlisted

Lost in someone so warped and twisted

On my knees, alive but dead

Look at the invisible blood I've bled

I'm almost gone, my mind has drifted

Don't expect much, I'm warped and twisted

Burnt out, wasted, sad, and hollow

Today's just yesterday's tomorrow

The sun died out, the ashes sifted

I'm still here, warped and twisted

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TopsyTurvy commented on Warped And Twisted

06-10-2011

Loved "Call my mind, the number's unlisted" fantastic way to describe how i've felt a few times

meaningless38 commented on Warped And Twisted

01-17-2011

wow!!!!! dude thats beast all i have to say!!!!!! keep writing

Xxchosen1xX

01/17/2011

Thanks man.

FranzJ commented on Warped And Twisted

01-17-2011

very intense indeed - and emotional - - - - - -- -- - -- -

Xxchosen1xX

01/17/2011

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

LenaM commented on Warped And Twisted

01-17-2011

Damn but this is intense the rhyme perfection and oh I can relate a 10 from me

Xxchosen1xX

01/17/2011

Thank you. It has been hard to get my poetry out there.

MindNumbing commented on Warped And Twisted

01-17-2011

I'm so glad this title caught my eye! The rhythm of this is outstanding and the content is definitely relatable. You've done an excellent job with this, chosen1 and it was an absolute pleasure to read! 10+ :)

Xxchosen1xX

01/17/2011

Thank you. It feels so good to be appreciated. Please spread the word for support.

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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