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Look At Me

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Look At Me

Look at me
What do you see?
Do you see anything?
Are you afraid to look beyond the surface of me?

Look at me
Do you see the lines etched into my face?
Years of struggle and fear, sadness and quiet
desperation.

Look at me
Can you not see I need you to be the strong one for awhile,
That I am tired,
That I have had to be the strong one for too long now.

LOOK AT ME
I'm almost gone...

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PRIESTESSMACK commented on Look At Me 01-26-2009: this is a poem about how you feel about yourself. very deep. we get better as we gain experience and the lines are not a bad thing, that's character.; Reply to Comment