Looking Glass

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    Looking Glass
    As I was looking through the looking glass.
    Your reflection I could see.
    In another time.
    How could it possibly be.
    You were standing there.
    Looking back at me.
    Stepping through the looking glass.
    As you guided me.
    To a place of peacefulness.
    A place to be defined.
    A place to be free.

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    HarverTomsson commented on Looking Glass

    12-21-2010

    In a poem, it is always what you do with your metaphor that counts. too bad , too late you recognize a friendship to benifit you now. Of couse, you could fb, text, or pick up the phone . . . Harv
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    abhash0 commented on Looking Glass

    07-12-2009

    The last three lines are interesting..The vision and distraction of the vision? The world with or within. Lovely.
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    universescribe1 commented on Looking Glass

    12-08-2008

    This hints at a parallell dimension. Alternative universe. I like that, to step outside of immediate reality. Nice
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    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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