Looking into his eyes

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    Looking into his eyes
    When I look into his eyes,
    I'm taken aback in such surprise.
    To see such depth within them lies,
    I wonder if he'll hear my cries.
    Even though we have no ties,
    he should know I will tell no lies.
    But when I look into his eyes,
    I see sadness that within them cries.
    He holds this feeling so it never dies.
    But he hides this feeling cause he is wise.
    That's what I see when I look into his eyes.

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    giri commented on Looking into his eyes

    07-14-2009

    a wise poeme from a wise lady the eye is the visionary part of this lovely world. thank you for showing the sight friend.
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    lenitabonita commented on Looking into his eyes

    04-29-2009

    Very good wow a lotta feeling. your talented! Can't wait to read more!
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    MiserysMistress

    05/28/2009

    Thanks, I wrote this poem for a friend. Sometimes the look in his eyes just hit you in the soul and make you want to cry.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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