Lost Part 2

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Lost Part 2

im lost in a sea of emotion and rationality
and my destiny is partially determined by me
yet its hard to tread water when it runs so deep
And i must lay awake because ill drown if a sleep
yet its a quiet body, not so much as a peep
yet i feel a chill cause i know that silent predators creep
it's just me my life preserver and my paranoid thoughts
About new love past love ,and love that was lost
At what cost do i maintain a promise to self
To not make a move to my lifes in good health
and good stature can i capture what rightfully mine
Will my prize be there for me at the end of the time
Thisway of living has to be labeled a crime
because im stealing from myself, and running out of life lines
and when the time is up, sure enough a rope as been tossed
A holy ship has come and found me, Im no longer lost.

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LadyIntellect commented on Lost Part 2

03-23-2009

i am lost for words right now.....Loved it!

MistiLane commented on Lost Part 2

03-23-2009

Great wording in this piece. I like what you had to say, most days you think there's no one else feeling what you're feeling. Definitely keep on writing! Read some of mine if you get a chance.

obg3684 commented on Lost Part 2

03-14-2009

Great poem bro keep writin

Wren87 commented on Lost Part 2

03-14-2009

This is probably one of the best poems i read check mine out when you have the time

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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